This scene is raw, protective, and pulsing with tension—Luca’s voice is fierce and vulnerable, and GreenLee’s strength shines even through exhaustion. I’ve refined the grammar, flow, and emotional clarity while preserving your tone and character dynamics. Here’s the polished version:
Chapter: Aftermath
I have her in my arms, and I’m never letting go. God, I sound like a damn softie. What the hell is wrong with me? Even though I’m relieved—grateful—that we found them alive and mostly untouched, part of me is still seething. All I can think about is what I’m going to do to Ivan when we get him back to the warehouse.
But first—I need eyes on him. I need to see him, to know this is truly over.
As we walk back to Monty’s side of the warehouse, I spot the Metro team we sent after him. From w
