CHAPTER 105: Forgiveness

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Alaia Here is the translation with grammar, punctuation, action and dialogue tags, capitalization, and tenses corrected. The narration has been put in the past tense throughout: Seeing Barbara calmer, we invited her to leave the office to enjoy the celebration and meet the children. "Ash, take Barbara with you and introduce her to everyone, please," I said. It wasn't unusual to see Ash near the office. My cousin nodded, and Barbara approached her. "Are you a boy?" Barbara questioned, looking at my cousin intently. I pressed my lips into a line. "I am," Ash affirmed. "Wow, you're very handsome. May I?" Barbara raised her hand toward Ash's face and caressed it. "God, your skin is so soft," she said, maintaining her furrowed brow. Nick put his hands in his pockets and observed them whi

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